"Crystalline stream cool and tranquil
reflect the autumn sun"
Instead of tranquil in the first line I think you should change it to 'soft'.
Instead of "reflect" in the second line, "Reflecting".
Tranquil is a little overused in nature poems, and soft makes the poem seem almost tangiable.
I like this opening, mainly because I haven't read anything quite like it. I don't think I've read any nature poems when they actually said a stream was 'cool', kudos.

"that shins through the arms of many tress."
It shins? As in the lower part of my leg? You mean shinEs. You don't need the "many" in that line.
And again, I really like this line. It's different, plus the idea of it shineing through the arms of trees is a nice thing to thing about. Good images created.

"Their leafs of red, orange and yellow"
*Leaves not leafs.
"Sway in the fresh crisp breeze."
These lines are okay, they don't do as much for me as the other ones do, however.

"The woodland birds sing
their sweet love songs,"
You don't need "their" in the second line.

"as the sun slowly sets
over the distant horizon."
This ending is okay but it sort of lets the begining of the poem out. You started so powerful and then it went flat.
If you want to extend this then perhaps you could talk about the night with fireflys and whatnot.

Still, I did like this, the begining is splendid.
5/5

jess ~

Slashing gold, orange
and pink over the clouds.

a perfect way to picture it,I really liked it!

I dont feel like your should make this poem longer iether i like it. im not sure what these poems are called but i see they have a lot to do with nature, alot like your poetry. i can only guess that you have your eyes remained open as you watch life. great work
- Raindrops 5/5

The imagery in this poem really stands out and the rhyme and flow is beautiful

that shines through the arms of many tress
that shines through the arms of many trees?

I like how reading through the poem , one feels a warmth of being wrapped within autumn. Its feels good imagining aurulent leaves surfing the winds. Great write. 5/5

Love it :)

I think this is a fine poem! good imagery

Amazing!!!!

5 great job(: x

Good poem... very tranquil. I could feel the calm energy off of your imagery.