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by John Long Oct 24, 2008
Life, society /
meaning of life
Tattered ribbons of black plastic
Caught on a wire fence,
Rising and falling,
Fighting the wind.
Not good or bad,
I love this! How you write so deeply in such a down to earth manner is captivating. I adore how you ended this poem with "just is", it's perfect! :)
A philosophical snapshot. Deceptively simple, yet very powerful in the spaces between the words.
Very good poem, I like the wordage,
by Ingrid de Klerck
I read this a couple of times to let the image sink in. It's indeed a Zen- feeling I got reading it...Yes, I loved it!
Nice to see you posting again:)