End This Life.

by Hologram   Oct 28, 2008


Torturing Pain
Surrated knife
One Deep Cut
To End This Life.

Slice my wrist
Hurts so good
Tempting to go
I know I should.

Letting go
Sick of staying
Tired of sympathy
Past replaying.

Tired of smiling
I'm just a fake
How much more
Am I willing to take?

Cut deep
Blood dried
Tonight is the night
I finally died.
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Not at all good.
But just needed to let off some steam i guess!

Renee
xx

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful & very sad. I liked the flow, very well done from me. 5/5, Em

  • 15 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    It is good, trust me.
    Its fantastic; As yur poems usually are.

    :) Good Work :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Actually aside from the taboo topic (which I write on myself) the poem itself was not all the bad, you had a good rhythm going and your word choice and expression was not bad at all. Sometimes that need to let off steam brings about our best work.

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