The last line was a clincher.. and the concept was good. The flow and word usage worked beautifully... as well as the way you worded everything. 5/5

Broken whispers of our decrypted love
Clawing into what was once laying inside
These tears trying desperately to forget
While my emotions finding a place to hide

These were like woah! I really liked it. it was a nice read and there wasn't anything wrong with the poem. I liked the flow and everything overall, I think was amazing=]

This is a very passionate dark poem reflecting the pain of a lost relationship . very well written

Beatiful poem.Well done.In the 3rd stanza though you have some odd symbols in the 4th line that can easily be edited out.Just thought I'd let you know.

"Stop the whispers, show me are true love"
^In the 1st line in the last stanza, did you mean to put "our" instead of "are"?

Great poem though.Great emotion.5/5

-Amber

I like this poem. The flow was good and the little bit of rhyming you had helped out with that. Hmm, I don't know what else to say about it. I say nothing wrong with it. I gave it a 5/5.

I like this poem. The emotion you displayed very very well.

"Broken whispers of our decrypted love
Clawing into what was once laying inside
These tears trying desperately to forget
While my emotions finding a place to hide"

^^^ This first stanza is perfect. I find nothing wrong with the flow, the vocabulary you use is a little out-of-the-ordinary, but it works well.

"So long has it been since I have truly cried
That the tears sting as they float down my face
These days that you seem to be missing
Are turning me into nothing but a lonely disgrace"

^^^ You are having trouble with the flow of the last line here. It needs to be shortened and I suggest something like "Are turning me into a lonley disgrace"

"I opened my heart to what was once me
Spilling my emotions for the world and you
You use to call this feeling the truest part of love
Where are you now, after everything we've been through?"

^^^ In the third line I think you mean "used" not "use." This stanza seems a little rough and corse. I would suggest shortening the last two lines by a couple syllables or lengthening the fiirst two by just as many. maybe something like
"You called this feeling the truest part of love
Where are you now, after all we've been though?"

"I need your comfortable cuddling
I want your fulfilling passion
I need this thing called love
I want your understanding compassion"

^^^ This is my favorite stanza. It flows, it's creative and all around clever.

"Stop the whispers, show me our true love
Make me feel again on the inside
Let me remember our tears of laughter
Because from our love I cannot hide."

^^^ What a great closure to a wonderful poem. It really sums everything up well. Plus, the flow is right on. I see no problems!

Overall this is a very well written poem. The flow is off in some places but it can be fixed fairly easily! :) 5/5