This is a very sad poem, you includes a lot of emotion in this one, beautiful write! Again i thought the rhyming was very good! =]

I enjoyed this poem. It's not normally an area that I vote in.

I really liked the simile's that were all through the poem and the metaphores that were between the similes that really did this poem justice. I felt that it was a wonderful poem and enjoyed each comparison to the next. It's truly great and think that you're a very talented writer.

The first of the poem really started off forced, I thought it was just going to be a force rythme that was off and on. Flow as off and the rythme scheme really showed that.

I was the soughing sound you made when you thought you had nothing more to give.

*sighing* I believe it suppose to be. You can also remove "more" out of there because "nothing to give." is really just the same. I know it's a little picky, but little things add up to the big ones.

I really liked this poem and thought it was wonderful and really worth the read. It's one of the better love poems that I've read in so long that I can't remember.

5 out of 5 pumpkins :D

The concept to this poem was really touching. And the way you've used your words was very effective. The flow was... interesting. Overall this was very beautifully written and a very nice read. 5/5! Keep it up!

This poem is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read! The combination of simple and more complex language here is amazing!

The four stanza structure of aabb rhyming, a classoc... The subject is one many can relate to...

The choosing of words was perfect in every single place, and the metaphores were imaginable and easy to relate to.

An excellet work, deserves even more than a 5/5!