Rain

by XSECRETLYBROKENX   Nov 1, 2008


She is standing in the rain
Where it is getting cold
There she stands alone
Lies are what shes told

It`s so very sad
To see a girl fall
When it`s all the boy`s fault
Then he says nothing at all

He refuses to talk
He wont even listen
Yet every time she looks at him
His eyes still glisten

She told him she still loves him
He still doesn't`t care
Hes not the one getting hurt
So this war isn`t very fair

She trys to move on
Yet she still can`t forget
All the past times
And how can he just be done with it

So now he`s moved on
With the girls ex-best friend
The girl is left broken
This is the where her story ends

The boy wont give her heart back
But she has no other heart to fit
There is no point to life
If you have no heart in it

So she goes into the kitchen
Which there she grabs a knife
She then stabs herself to end the pain
She also ends her life

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  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The reader can sense the sadness and pain that you have written in this piece, excellent work. Thank you for sharing your work with us. May you find peace and joy deep within your once again soon.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Very sad poem!
    the way you wrote it put so much emotion into it....
    very well done
    xo

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful. I wanted to cry, but smile because of the wonderful emotion you've created. 5/5, very well done.

    -mandy :)