Simply Put

Ok, this poem was short and it was directly to the point, which is good. The rythme scheme was good, it was short enough so that you didn't have to worry too much about the flow.

This poem is too cliche about everything. Self harm poems here are a dime a dozen. I know that it's most likely a release for you, but perhaps you should try something different than just writing with a direct approach. like "I want to feel anything, something that makes me know i'm alive. like whip across my skin it burns with all the rest it resides" It says that same thing but doesn't say anything about slashing yourself...it's really not health to do it.

I think the poem was good, but nothing great. I give it

4 Boss Cookies out of 5.

Well I hope that you don't really want to be dead. The poem is short but it does get the point across nice job. Another 5/5