I didnt understand it. what does it mean

Once again the flow and rhyme is exelent. sadly enough there are a lot of people who have gone through this and come out with scars.
Well Written

I didnt understand it. what does it mean

^^ hahahaha that person is stupid...that was really funny..

This was an incredibly deep write! I really enjoyed it although it was so sad...Abuse is such a sad subject to read about and such a terrible situation one can put herself let alone her children in...You're a great writer! I like your work!
Chels

Thats a pity! the poem is well written but it is really sad! I agee with chelsey! U did a gud job though! i like this one!

Hey, i enjoyed this write much more, although some rhymes still did seem forced, i felt that this poem overcame that as the message was nicely given with little repetition and enough power in each stanza to keep the reader going till the end. just one thing that bugged me: when i write a poem or read a poem, i like to think that after its end it should have a impact, like make the reader think. your poem did, but the impact could be greater if you simply rephrase or modify the rhyme scheme of the last two lines, because although i understood it, the flow threw me..
otherwise, i liked this write, its a sad topic, and sadly common.. reminded me of one of my favorite stories: 'A child called it'.. maybe you've heard of it.. =]
xx

Hey, i enjoyed this write much more, although some rhymes still did seem forced, i felt that this poem overcame that as the message was nicely given with little repetition and enough power in each stanza to keep the reader going till the end. just one thing that bugged me: when i write a poem or read a poem, i like to think that after its end it should have a impact, like make the reader think. your poem did, but the impact could be greater if you simply rephrase or modify the rhyme scheme of the last two lines, because although i understood it, the flow threw me..
otherwise, i liked this write, its a sad topic, and sadly common.. reminded me of one of my favorite stories: 'A child called it'.. maybe you've heard of it.. =]
xx