If Only

by 777   Nov 8, 2008


Lost in a world that is so blind
people who care
I can not find

On my own
walking donw the street
people go by
and dont even blink

If only they stoped
if only they cared
then would i stil be here?

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  • 11 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Would you though. Nicely done. Short and sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by silvertung69

    It dosn't look finished you pulled me in then droped me off a cliff. It's good thoe it made sence and good flow.

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