Awww. that was wonderful. keep it up. 5/5 ~KM~

Really enjoyed the read it was nicely written. Can relate. nice work 5/5

Damitt i dont kno wat happened but u brought tears to my eyes not cool lol, it must be the music i was playing, keep it up

Wooww that was real deep i liked dis one

That is sad!!! :...(

Very emotional... well done. Keep writing!

I smile every time I look at you,
I laugh only when your near,
I'm actually happy around you.
To me, you are a perfect flaw.
^^ twisted last line nice nice nice! good way to start it with something interesting makes me wonder why and what happened

You called me an angel,
I said you lied,
But you never gave up,
No matter how much I tried.
^^why did he "lie"? what gave you doubt?! why couldn't he prove it? something in your past?

I've never trusted others,
Because I always had you.
But your gone now,
And I'm started to wonder if we were true.
^^ah...that is not good : / its never fun to question those types of things

I know I loved you,
I still do.
But you are never coming back...
Can we really be through?
^^ i have felt likes this before and it hurts so bad i really related to the poem here!

I know ill never stop caring,
To me this was real.
I know ill never stop loving you,
I know, to me, we will always be true.
^^ such a good ending to answer one of the key questions you had earlier on was just the right thing to do!

I could so relate to this poem and that is such a good thing to have the reader do! great wording and flow! there were no bumps 5/5!

Once again the imadgry that you have used in this poem is exelent. You have defenatly used the writers saying well, and that is:
Writers arnt people who have something to say as much as people who find a diffrent way to say things.
Bravo!

Well Written
Darkcrystalbtrfy

Awesome poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
The only thing I saw that you might fix is
"ill" should be "I'll" I know it is a small thing butt yeah some people make a big deal out of it. Anyways I gave this poem a 5/5. Nice job.

Nicely done.
keep it up.