Hey Grant, I haven't don't many of your poems as I haven't been able to get to know you.
Well onto my review of your poem.
This poem is very well done, it's words are perfect, it's flow is almost perfect, there is one line that sets it off, and the scheme is amazing.
It's one of my favorite poems that I've done and I'm adding it to my favorite poems. It really shows what you've been able to do if given the chance.
I've read other pieces from you, but they were no where near the calibur of this piece. It's really amazing and one of the best poems that I've seen in a long time that can truly make me think "this is a good poet/poem"
The only thing that I would look at adjusting is "Enticing kisses at lovers tryst
Seductive tease seen through the mists"
"Sensual tease, for living bliss" or something along those lines.
I mean, honestly the poem Is right spot on. It's one of the really great poems.
As well I have put it up for this weeks poetry contest, This will only be the third poem I have put up there ever, since I have been a member of this site. If you check I've been one for a very long time, that will tell you how impressed I was with this piece that you've done.