I really like this,
its sweet.
:)

Kay-Jay

check some of mine out?

Wonderfully Penned!!!

Wow, i like this a lot. It tells a good story.
Keep it up!

-Chris

Wonderful short poem excellently written and i love the story told. yup 5/5

I love the story behind it. "Im Begging for forgiveness upon your disgrace...ive know that ive done wrong now i know that time has changed"-one of my lines. your poem reminded me of mine...lovely job.

victoria