Right things to say ©

by PunkrockPrincezz   Nov 22, 2008


You always know the right words to say,
to keep me happy everyday.

Evenwhen my days are grayer then gray.
I cant tell you how much you mean.
Cause it may ruin our future between.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There needs to be a space between "even" and "when". Also, "cant" should be "can't". Otherwise I enjoyed this short piece, nice wording, but I did feel it could be a bit longer. 4/5 from me, take care....

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