This made me cry..one of my favourites from your newer stuff..

5/5

I love love love this f

I really like this poem.I loved it.
5/5

Beautifully written. "You're mumbling and turning, I think you're sleeping here
Don't worry love I've got you, you're safe, I'm near" was my favorite part. I cannot count how many times my fiance has said the same words to me. Thank you for sharing this :) 5/5

I felt the whole poem had a beautiful flow to it. The only part I felt I got a little tripped up was "You're staring, asking me if that's my last excuse
I don't think it is one, but if you want me to choose
I'd rather have two stars then all the fireworks
I'll show you what that means if you won't stop to search"

I would consider revising the wording a little to help it flow like the rest of the poem..... Still got 5/5 from me though!

I loved this poem, I never did return a comment when you left one on mine 2 years ago.
Wasn't to good at keeping up but now im making up for lost time.

This poem was really good though, i loved the last 2 paragraphs. :) good stuff