In Your Arms I Lay

This is awsum going into my favourites for sure =]

Wow! 5/5

This poem is very touching indeed. It's just so beautiful and the flow was silky smooth
I wish that poem was written for me...The one that lays beside you must've been a lucky guy.

5/5 from me

I really do enjoy this poem. its nice.
nice job, great stuff there Cara.
nice :)

I wake up in the morning with you beside me
With just one look from you, my soul is set free
Your arms around my waist, I feel so complete
The words you whisper to me are ever so sweet
^^such a warm and fuzzy feeling opening : ) it makes the reader smile

I do not say a word, but in your arms I lay
When I am with you, my troubles float away
Hold me forever babe, I need you here
A day without you, is my deepest fear
^^ those feelings when they are this strong make every problem melt away and make life worth while

You look into my hazel eyes, "I love you" escapes from your lips
Your hands start to wander downwards of my hips
Your loving fingers take rest upon my thigh
Your touch makes me feel like I could fly
^^ : ) ahh so cute!!! i cant name one girl who WOULDN'T want this!

Never leave me my baby; I need you by my side
I need you to help me; I need your special guide
I have to see your smile at the start of each new day
And then no matter what I face, I know there is a way
^^ cherish the person that makes you feel this way !

5/5 great great great job!!
i voted for you : )