Nature's Disappearing Act - Sedoka

I really like the style of this, the emotion felt and the title = WOW! 5/5, Em xx

Awesome! i love short poems! 5/5

Well written in words of wisdom and intelligent information. You gave the reader all he needed to see the situation as you do , with a smooth easy flow.

Lumbering tree trunks
Hold masses of vivid greens
Providing natural shade

With little words you have decribe nature's forest beautifully and how it is consired home and shelter for the creatures living in the forest

Deforestation
Destroying vast areas
Of this stunning wonderland

Here I can see the dissapearing act from luscious green forest to completely bold flatten land. It is sad that they are cutting down on the natural reserve and not planning to re-plant it back

Overall, you have worked really great on the imginery.Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5

Well done a very nice poem with a strong message, global warming is a huge problem that few people ever think about
Well done

Grant