Too Close

by Cara   Sep 5, 2009


Irresponsible longing leaves me curious
to taste the scent that you reek of,
to entangle my soul with yours and to
listen and hear if our heart beats correspond.

My all too eager hands wish to mingle with yours,
only to see if they fit together like I imagined.

My imaginings take me far but you take me further.

Before there was space in my head for everyone,
Now you take up all the room, how dare you?
Scared to let you in; you're too close already
But could it be worth the risk?

My smile deserves to be with the reason for its existence,
therefore it would be unjust for me to refrain now.

**First time i have written in a long time, i know it needs work but i had to get this out. :)

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  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Great poem! :) Nice work! I love how you said...scared to let you in; you're too close already! :) Smile!

  • 14 years ago

    by mostafa

    Just beautiful :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    5/5...ha ha...was the sex good??? LOL...I got poems too if you want to commet or rate them...

  • 14 years ago

    by DoRk

    Hey wtever works for u to get ur feelings out helps
    Jus rewrite it again
    Good poem tho
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by groovydude

    Sounds like love is entangled in your heart. I like how you stand while confused, its tough. well done