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by AngelicDecadence   Nov 30, 2008


I've told you this before,
I know I swore.
I just hope you know I have no fear,
I'm in love with you dear,
Always, worse when you're near.

I know you're my friend,
But I'm just playing pretend.
I want to be more,
And it's becoming a sore,
For I know this down to my core.

I'm worried about what to do now,
Cos I don't know how much you will allow.
I could tell you so many things,
If you would only give me wings,
Can't you see you control my strings?

I want to be yours Hun,
Who knows, this could be fun.
Will you allow me to get close?
Or will you just call me gross?
I wish I could tell you what I want most.

Being near is enough for now,
So I'll take a bow.
Because your close to me,
It may not make me glee,
But I think I'll be here so you might see.

**Do you like? Its for someone special, hopefully he knows who he is.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lauren

    I love this poem. I think the rhyme scheme was a little overwhelming, but other than that I really liked this. I like how the person is in love but is willing to settle for just a friendship so the love won't be ruined.

    "I know you're my friend,
    But I'm just playing pretend.
    I want to be more,
    And it's becoming a sore,
    For I know this down to my core."
    I love this stanza!! It has so many different emotions. Love, yet sadness that you are just friends right now. You can really feel the pain inside. by "For I know this down to my core." I think those words are very powerful and effective.

    I think this is a really great poem, and it's sweet. I like how the person compromises for just friends even though they are aching inside for this love. It shows real courage and a lot of self-lessness. (I think thats the word lol) It is really great!!! 5/5 Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    First stanza: always = it's always
    Cos = Cause

    - - -

    You wrote this quite well. I think that the rhyme scheme took away from what you could have put into this poem. And, a few of the rhymes seemed a bit forced - but overall you did a good job writing this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Awesome job once again! Just be careful about your spelling:

    So I'll take a bow.
    Because you(r) close to me

    =) But I'm picky! Hehe, nah I just want to make sure your poetry shines bright! Take care kiddo!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww that's cute.... :]

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awww... i love it. amazing job as per usual.5/5. great job. i really liked this one. ~KM~

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