My love for you

by Mary   Dec 1, 2008


You are the last thing on my mind before i sleep
When i wake up your the first thing i think
The things you say and the way you look at me
Puts a smile on my face and i feel so free

I love how you are always there
To make me happy and to show that you care
When you talk to me i forget
All my misery and all my pain
Because you are there close by me
In my mind and heart is where you will always be

I just wish you would feel the same way
Give me a clue and you will brighten up my day
Tell me you love me
Tell me you just want to be friends
Anything would help my heart rest

My love for you is something i have never felt
When i think of your face all i would like is to melt
Melt away into my happy place
Where you and I will than embrace.

plz help me make this poem better... any comments good or bad would help a lot.... I havent written a love poem in a very long time so i have lost my ability to write these poems soo if anyone could give me some advice... that would be great :)

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  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    It is a really cute poem. I know that I can relate to it-try changing the rhyme scheme in the second stanza(: 5/5