Wow Crystal what a beautiful poem i was pleased and saddened on reading it , pleased because i've hade the profound pleasure of watching you *bloom and blossom * since you arrived on this site and graced us with your beauty *like this poem*.
Saddened because i know why you have this terrible longing, be strong Crystal someone as special as you will never be alone, know that at least for now you are much loved by myself and fellow members of this site that have taken the time to get to know you
I have nothing to add about your poem i think it was flawless
this poem is so full of imagery that it is easy for the reader to see what your mind is projecting, what your heart is crying, what your longing touch is aching to feel. The ocean is a powerful force and its mystery, splendour and magic lends itself perfectly to this poems theme.
The second to last stanza made me go :(. It was sad. The last stanza brought hope though, which was a great way to end the poem seeing how it's a love poem. I really liked how you stuck with the ocean theme instead of doing a bunch of unrelated metaphors. That was cool. Five out of five.