Comments : Still controls

  • 11 years ago

    by Damsel In Distress

    Omggg this is sooooooooo gud...!!! love it !

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. what an amazing... just wow. 5/5. great job. ~KM~

  • 10 years ago

    by just ashley

    3rd stanza it says mysef i think u mean myself

    other thn tht its a good poem. keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    Well no doubt that you have lots of spelling error (which can be fixed with the help of this site's spell check) but what enthralls me about this poem is the context that you have presented. I can feel the raw emotions and your stuggles of moving on. Other than the spelling, Keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Your emotions are displayed very well in this poem, the chioce of structure you have chosen is also well suited to the piece =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    I Like the way you let your emotions flow..good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful, 5/5. Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Siham

    Sooo nice poem 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    The concept of this poem is miraculous.
    I love the way that your emotions flowed in every stanza. It's sad but at the same time it show's how strong your love is for this person. Truly amazing!

  • 9 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Thats good. i love it.