Just a forgotten soul
by A Red Rose Dec 7, 2008
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How dose it feel to be a forgotten soul,your there for every one but when it comes to you theres noone in site huh,they cant hear your heart breaking with loneliness ,or hear your screams for love and for someone just to hold you and say its OK,you lay in the dark hope some one cares to call or come by,but your just a forgotten soul ,they have there life and you better have yours,just a forgotten soul.... |
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14 years ago
I liked your poem , I can relate to the theme of it. Often we feel just as you have.
the only suggestion I have is to seperate your lines, when they are run together people tend to pass them over.
