How can this have no comments!!

This is such an amazing piece!!

The words paint a fabulous picture in the mind and you can almost feel the cold air as they dance so gracefully

"Pirouette; so graceful, as her battered ballet slippers soak up the ice"

Loved this line!
5/5
Gem

Wow, I'm honestly speechless! Reading your poem was like reading a romantic little story. You gave the reader a clear visual, and described every bit of action that was going on. I thoroughly enjoyed this and this has to be one of my favorites! So unique and orginal, I'm just at loss of words! Keep writing, you have such talent, always and forever. Have a Merry Christmas!

Your free flowing words painted a picture in my mind of a beautiful ballerina scating in awesome scenery