It's good. You can write. I enjoyed this poem of yours. Well done!

Really good. its fantastic. :)

This was amazing! Very sad, but because its written so well, youve made it an enjoyable read! lol, if that makes sense? Well anyways, it flowed very well, and your rhyme scheme worked perfectly.

No more secrets,
No more lies,
No more looking,
Into those evil eyes.

That stanza was sooo well done. It was the one that really stood out to me anyway. Flowed really well.

Nice work, and keep it up. 5/5

Thoughtful heartfelt & meaningful keep writing!!

This rhyme scheme was really well played out
it flowed so very well and every word and stanza was powerful

this is a favorite of mine, i really like it!

Great poem!!! flows nice and you can picture it in your head. keep up the great work!
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