This is very sad ... death of child is hardest for any mother ...
touching write

keep writing..

Nicely written, Daisy:) It's my fave.

Waht can i say about this poem !!

sad , extreemly touching , and yet i can imagine the whole scene , i almost had a tear in my eye for this !

great job !

There was a sweetness to it but at the same time it was very sad. Nice wording and flow. It was a short poem but that didn't bother me any. I gave it a 5/5.

"The little child blew her last breath,
And used it to say, 'Goodbye.................'"

good stuff thats emotional stuff life is really more tragic than it seems.

Wow..that was really good. Really emotional. I loved it. Keep up the great work =]

This is such a beautiful and touching poem, congrats and you have much talent. Short and to the point, but it had the exact effect that it should. 5/5

Wow, this is so wonderfully powerful. i like short poems that just hit you really hard.

well done on this! xx