CJ,

I have goose bumps all over:)
Such a beautiful Christmas poem, I love how you made it a religious one.
Too many people think Christmas is about presents and eating, but it's not!
It is a time to remember that once God gave us his most precious, his son...and we should think back on that and on how badly we treated him, just because he reminded us of all we are NOT.
A much beautiful write, my dear friend

God bless you,

5/5 Ingrid

Thats quite good!
5/5

Wow what a touching piece. I could just feel the emotion. Very well expressed.

*5/5*

Wow, im not a christian, but i found this very touching. Great poem, amazing...

Very beautiful write... on things that we should think on... questions that we should ask our conscience...
very inspirational write... wonderfully penned..

The rightful king to the rightful thrown
thrown=throne, i guess

keepwriting..

CJ,
I chose to nominate this one instead ot the other one I promised to vote for, because this one is even more beautiful:)

Hugs!

Ingrid

Cj, I loved this one also great flo and rythm I really like you work i am going to keep reading 5/5 Caleb Poet With A Purpose

Aww this was another very good poem. i liked the structure and flow of it. great wording aswell. wonderful work (:

This are good

U have got extraordinary talent.i like ur style.excellent poem.5