A look can convey so much

by anonymous lover   Dec 30, 2008


A glimpse, a gaze, a smile on the face

A look can convey so much

The heart dashing in a scenting pace

Although they're out of touch.

How should I construe his countenance

That alters like night and day

Giving out a tender consonance

Or just a repellent ray.

A look of love is his gift

That cause me to go dizzy,

leaving my quaky body stiffed

Ensued with ardent tizzy.

Followed with a day of tribulation

Is what augments in me

When my eyes search for his fixation

But he doesn't want to see.

Sometimes a glance is what I get

That lets me know I crossed his mind

Feeling thereupon a sudden regret

Cause it's not him in my head that I should find.

The expressions that he emanates

Versatile but still so sober

He often combines with some serenades

Before my heart he confines in lockers.

How should I withstand his appearance

That casted a spell over me

Having control over all my abearance

No doubt, I'll never be free

Copyright 2009 D. Albert-Weiss

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  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written and the formatting makes it very easy to read

  • 15 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Another great poem. I really like the beginning of this one. It loses just a touch of power in the end. But mostly because of this part.

    The expressions that he emanates

    Versatile but still so sober

    He often combines with some serenades

    Before my heart he confines in lockers.

    As most everything else in the poem has rhym, this part lost me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is excellent. I love everything about this poem. It has a ton of emotion in it. And I can totally relate to it. I love the rhyming. And the whole idea of what you're trying to get across. I think it's a very unique poem. Excellent job

    Soda. E>

  • 15 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    Yet again another great poem. Looks like someone is getting favorited. ^_~" Keep up the fantastic work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    I like this one it's good