Oh, I so loved this!
You are rapidly becoming a superstar on this site, Azzza:)
I loved the words, the rhyme, the metaphors..it just painted a picture and rendered a message very strong.

Chapeau, my friend!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I agree with the other two, it was fantastic. I also am a bit speechless, it was totally terrific. This line really stood out to me:
'Cascading tears innocence lost'

Keep up the great work! this poem was amazing. The flow, the rhyme.. everything. Awesome, awesome work!
5/5

The bloodiest battle were waged in the name of religion. You penned a perfect piece, It carried so much emotion for me. Thank you, for a wonderful poem the first one I read this year.

I love youwotding and rhyme scheme and the mystical tove in this poem

Azzza, this poem was one of your best! It is very mysterious and has obviously attracted alot of attention. I am proud of you! Great Job. It is flawless and very meaningful. 5/5

I love the way this poem is rather mysterious, its very interesting, a great piece of work.
Well done

Wow is all i ca say that was amazing. this poem is so beautiful.
5/5 from me :)

"Cascading tears innocence lost
Priceless gems pays heavy cost
Middle fence powerless to enforce
repetitious cycle or run from course.", Azzza, this touches the dept of my soul. Such powerful words that i can relates to just by listening the news all the time. Your poems are excellent these days. I can feel an increase of happiness in your 'world'. Very well done my friend, 5/5, love it, kel.

I didn't understand this poem except something about religion. I read it over and over again, even aloud. I think everything flows beautiful tho but I really don't want to rate it yet, till I can understand it. If it's not too much trouble maybe you could email me about it because I love poetry but I don't always understand it.

This is nice i really liked it :) strong imagery :) x

I totally understood this poem and your meanings behind the words. It flows brilliantly. I only wish I could write like this!
Fantastic work.

5/5

I really enjoyed the alliteration in this piece
The imagery was well done and I loved it. My favorite line was
"Cascading tears innocence lost"
This just spoke to me in so many ways
let me tell you you have a way with words
kaila
5/5

Hello ! I've gotta say ! it is the most amazing ending i've ever seen ! the way you've written the poem and the way you moved from issue to another is perfectly amazing! Keep it up! you'll be a great poet 1 day!... 5/5 !

I love it! Wow... It's AMAZING! Seriously, it left me speechless. It's so powerful and has great emotion!!! I love it!!!! Excellent job!! I can't unerstand why you have 4.9 rating for this poem.
5/5

Soda.

This one is sad but really good. u need to cheer up!! 5/5

I love your rhyming in this one. It flows really well.
Great job. :) And thanks for the comment.

Interesting poem. Joe reccomended it to me because I was questioning my religion.

Good job.