Woah! Very good and really long!! This is a very sad story and if this happened to a friend of yours or something then I am deeply sorry. If you created this then I give you props =) . I would just like to say that give commas on the needed lines and try to seperate them into stanzas. So it will look easier to read. A 5/5 good job =)

~Lonely Rose

Tells a wonderfully awful story. Absolutely great. It's a long read but you've managed to captivate the reader to go on. Impressive. 5/5

Wow
this is very powerful and deep, you really are a great writer
well done!!

WOW! this had me crying at the end! What a powerful, sad poem. Wonderfully written. Great job!
5/5

Wow i love the ryme in this and you did really good for a long poem

WOW a very sad story but very well written It really flows great

"She pulled the trigger,
And knew it was the end,
No more of the arguments,
That she had to mend."

It was one of the strongest parts of the poem..
Great Job..
5/5

Awwww so sad:( good work. 5/5
xx keep writing please