Rest in peace, brother.

by amber   Jan 11, 2009


A man you were, and yet so young
A long life you deserved, but didn't get
The things you wanted to do, now forgotten
The goals, never to be mentioned
Your face so full of life, now buried
The army was your life, and your death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Really sad yet really good.
    Sorry for your loSS
    KEEP Writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by He is the Reason

    *hugs you* Such a sad poem. You did a wonderful job writing it and expressing your emotions, the way you wrote it makes the reader feel the emotions of the poem, something I always look for. 5/5 Hang in there, loosing someone is never easy.

    ~*Angel*~