The Feeling... please tell me what you think =D

by dany   Jan 11, 2009


I needed a friend
Someone I could trust
The way I was living
Was simply unjust

Then you showed up
Like a ray of bright light
Turning things better
Making day out of night

I trusted you first
And you trusted me too
From that point forward
Our friendship just grew

Then after a while
As our friendship progressed
I began to have this feeling
Deep down in my chest

I ignored it at first
But it just kept on growing
And no matter what
It showed no signs of slowing

I'm very sure
That what I feel is true
So I want to let you know
Edith, I like you

Please don't get mad
It wasn't my fault
I just couldn't help it,
The feeling wouldn't halt

You make me smile,
Bring me up when i feel down,
You're a great girl,
And fun to have around

It was bound to happen
What did you expect?
You are just so lovable
And though flawed, you're perfect

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  • 15 years ago

    by XSECRETLYBROKENX

    Awwww...i love it...this poem is sooo sweet...i hope u get the girl whoever she is...but anyway i loved the poem and i think u put alot of true feeling in it...it must of taken a lot of work...well anyway keep it up and keep this one!!