Telephone line

by Birgit   Jan 12, 2009


So here we are again.
Six months later and the feeling hasn't changed.
I guess that won't ever go,
But our situations have rearranged.

You've learned to listen,
And gained respect.
Our love was like telephone line,
That rustled, so we had to reconnect.

And now the rustle's gone,
I hear you clearly again.
No more fights about nothing,
Just loving you where I am.

We were so stupid,
So silly,
So naive.
But it's so wonderful of us, to still believe.

I love you, no matter what.
It's obviously hard for others to believe.
But I don't really care anymore,
Cause I've always got you, and you've got me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that's really different, comparing love to phone lines. That's pretty cool though, I would never have thought of writing a poem about this. It was a pretty sweet poem, and I can definitely relate to it. You had some nice catchy rhymes in here as well. The flow was up and down, but for the most part it was good. Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Our love was like telephone line,
    That rustled, so we had to reconnect.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Gness

    Great job honestly some people dont see love in front of them like u do I can relate to this but thats the past great write.