My tounge whispers lies to my ears

by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX   Jan 16, 2009


Stand through the pain
Don't make a sound
After he beats me
I'll still sick around...

I'm not sure why
And I'm not sure how...
But my heart will follow him
Till I'm cold in the ground...

I know that this time
Will ever come
But he is the only one
I'd ever love

He wants me alive
So his anger gets out!
One day he will love me
I have no doubt

Stand through the pain..
Don't, make a sound
After he beats me...
I'll still, stick around

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inspired by superchick

rough draft...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    Strong poem full of powerful emotion. Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Tongue not tounge
    stick not sick
    is ever supposed to be never

    there is no punctuation, even though the poems very well write you need this. i no you said its a rough draft so expand on this and build around the idea.

    you do chose quite good words and arrange them rather weel for this type of poem.

    so keep it up

    p.s sorry don't take the criticism to heart its

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