Relieving tears

by Goodbye   Jan 16, 2009


Poems are my tears
Like confined rivers they flow down my face
I release my pain out silently in this crowded noisy world
For a moment I allow myself to feel
To live my emotions without being a marionette
Freeing myself for too much pressure
My inner is gloomy
Cool River is guttering slowly
Water under white ice is black
Someone drowned my dreams
But I fought back to gather pieces together
I feel relieved
Hot tears warm my pale cheeks
I grab your hand
And smile again
It is winter
But there is spring in my heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautiful write Noor ... very touching ...

    "Someone drowned my dreams
    But I fought back to gather pieces together"

    ^^ very touching lines ...

    "And smile again
    It is winter
    But there is spring in my heart "

    ^^ when i read these I was like "Wow"... there's so much beauty in these verse ... the feeling of joy... positiveness... optimism... loved it... and loved the imagery too :)

    beautiful write :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ares

    The end of this poem really touched me. really well written, it was so descriptive!

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