Turning Away From Skies
by Goodbye Jan 20, 2009
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Face covered by sadness |
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16 years ago
by Ares
The way you portray your emotions here is fantastic, it's very difficult to convey strong emtions like that, but you did it beautifully:)
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16 years ago
by Faithless
This is a sad write indeed. I can feel the pain that you are going through. The used of metaphor was greatly expessed.
My hate is like a black sheet
It covers all my crystal words
Anger is pouring magma from volcano
I scream for worthless memories
^^^ I like te way you end it. Crystals may be glittery but when it's coverd with a black sheet you couldn't see it's glitter.The use of metaphor here enable me to visualize the boiling anger.No matter how much you scream it's useless
Overall you did a fantastic job. I love each & every stanza of it
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16 years ago
by Jyoti Rawat
IT IS PAIN FULL. BUT GOOD
