Love's gone bitter

by bakebakebake   Jan 22, 2009


Baby, you called me beautiful.
you call me a wretch.
baby, you said you'll love me forever.
you say you love me no more.
baby, you said you'll shower me with love.
why do you make me cry again tonight?

yes, im sure i used to be beautiful, you used to love me forever, and would shower me with all your tender love, but did time change everything?

why, why do you say all mean things? dont you remember we used to be so in love? dont you remember we pledge our love?

still, it doesn't change my love.
anything, anything i'll do for you and only you.
because im sure, a time will come when you'll love me all over again. and this time, forever. true eternity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiL Ma

    Mi bad that should have read "everything else will fall into place"
    lol
    sryy about that

  • 16 years ago

    by LiL Ma

    Much much love to this
    as im sure yu already know from your comment on mi most recent poem we've both encountered the uncertainty and insecurities of relationships
    but if we really think about it, any man who cant see what hes doing is blind as far as im concerned
    and if their aware of the pain and bullsh*t they've put us through then we're better off without them
    and in time they'll realize the good women who they've taken for granted
    and then it's up to you to decide if your willing to take the risk of going through it again or if you truly believe it's worth it
    until then worry about you and only you
    everything else will fall apart
    this poem flawlessly encompasses how i felt about two weeks ago
    top rating from me
    dont let anybody bring you down
    keep ya head up and good luck with everything
    -lil ma

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