THE OTHER

by Katherine   Jan 23, 2009


It's out of the question for some
Others accept the challenge
The other varies in definition
For society doesn't agree on this matter
It's a sin
Discrimination there is plenty
Discouraged for the future
Abandonment comes to mind
All ages involved
Young and beautiful
Discovering the world around them
Middle age and discreet
Mature and experienced
Fulfillment in love for some
Adventure to others
Impossible to endure at times
Imposed for certain acceptance
Impressions made upon yourself
Moral overhang
An advice
Never accept to be second
Always first
Never accept the abandonment in a relationship
For with the personal experience
You will come to find a great disappointment with who you were alluded
Refuse if you have a choice
For the one that will be most hurt
Is you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Never accept the abandonment in a relationship
    For with the personal experience
    You will come to find a great disappointment with who you were alluded
    Refuse if you have a choice
    For the one that will be most hurt
    Is you

    ^^^^Really wise words, Katie.
    Indeed to accept being ingnored most of the times is killing for your self esteem. You are so right.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    It's out of the question for some
    Some accept the challenge

    To rid the repetition , maybe change the second some to others .

    The other has varies definitions

    Since this doesn't really make sense .. Maybe change it to The other varies in definition

    Discrimination there is plenty

    Add a ; to seperate these two ideas , so in between Discrimination and there .

    Otherwise , I think this poem is fantastic . It's got an amazing message . I'm going

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