The flawless flow and rhyme scheme is overshadowed by the tragic theme of a broken family. The delivery of the emotion that comes with it stands out so that a reader, such as myself, is sure to be moved.

That's really sad... I remember when my dad left it sucked. Great poem though, good rhymes and a good flow. It's excellent!
5 outta 5!

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Its so sad but its really good your looking out ofr her.

It's quite sad... But yOu've well-expressed yOur emOtions and the flOw is great tOo! :)

5/5 frOm me... :)

Well i can feel the emotions running thru the poem from the start to the finish...It is a sad write indeed. But im sure tt ure a good mom...and im sure tt she would understand when she get older...But it's good that she is with you then her junkie father...coz she would be saying "Mommy, call mommy" instead.It was certainly a pleasure to read this poem

Excellent Job
5/5

Wow this poem is great 5/5

I loved it!!!

I liked the story through this poem, but would work a little on the flow. It seemed a bit choppy in some areas.

This was a truly sad and beautiful poem. Nice work.