Comments : A Missing Daddy

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The flawless flow and rhyme scheme is overshadowed by the tragic theme of a broken family. The delivery of the emotion that comes with it stands out so that a reader, such as myself, is sure to be moved.

  • 11 years ago

    by Not Enough

    That's really sad... I remember when my dad left it sucked. Great poem though, good rhymes and a good flow. It's excellent!
    5 outta 5!

    <3 SP

  • 11 years ago

    by just ashley

    Its so sad but its really good your looking out ofr her.

  • 11 years ago

    by Annaam

    It's quite sad... But yOu've well-expressed yOur emOtions and the flOw is great tOo! :)

    5/5 frOm me... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well i can feel the emotions running thru the poem from the start to the finish...It is a sad write indeed. But im sure tt ure a good mom...and im sure tt she would understand when she get older...But it's good that she is with you then her junkie father...coz she would be saying "Mommy, call mommy" instead.It was certainly a pleasure to read this poem

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    Wow this poem is great 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I liked the story through this poem, but would work a little on the flow. It seemed a bit choppy in some areas.

  • 6 years ago

    by Melissa Coffman

    This was a truly sad and beautiful poem. Nice work.