A Hundred Million Tears

This was a major poem with a lot of feeling in it. You really poured your emotions into it, and you can tell just by reading it. Great job, 5/5

Another great one. keep up d good work.5/5

With a stronger end you would kill this poem
try pls try 4/5

Lot of sadness and frustration filled write ...
something's really troubling you gal .. I could feel that in the words ...
loved the tile ... thats what attracted me ...

A hundred million tears
Wasted over all these years

^^sometimes even I wonder if all those tears that I have shed... was it worth it ... well penned lines...

one typo:
fiiling = filling

wish you all the luck :)
keep writing...

Mm , something if i may tell you girl , we all with no exception , we all roll to that deep valley of darkness , before we get up again.

i dont agree you put yourself down , and say you are a b**ch
not because of a sensless and dumb fool guy ... or anyone else .

a hundredd million tears , .. you wil shed more till you know how to stand on your feet , and start knwoing , that life will hold more of this , it is not the end ...

you will break hearts too, remember when you was broken ..

great poem

5/5