Comments : Hate

  • 15 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow! You've shown a lot of emotion and I love the flow and the rhyme scheme here.
    I used to feel like this, so if its true I can relate. You did a good job with this, love the repetition of the word hate making the poem stronger. 5/5 from me!

  • 13 years ago

    by tears in heaven

    Really nice poem i can relate to it well.... look at some of my poems if you'ld like

  • 12 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Hatred is a curse... You must release yourself to it. A well done piece!!! God bless you!!! i hope you'll find peace.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I really really really love this poem! A couple things though...
    1) In this line "And face whats true." I'd change face to realize only because you've used face in the line before.
    2) I'd use punctuation to guide the reader how to read it. Like you're talking about hatred right? So, I'd go like "I hate your every lie!" instead of "I hate your every lie" and then continue on... It just shows the emotion.

    Loved it though! 5/5 from me! <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Wow that is a really emotional poem! i really like it. good job :) 5/5:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Hate is a strong word to say i hate something's in life i like the title i can really relate to this poem alot this how i feel too i feel your hurt and pain in this poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Very beautiful poem darling!

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh soo emotional loved it

    I hate how you plea
    I hate how I give in
    Like waves over the sea
    Drowning who I've been

    I hate your every lie
    I hate all thats true
    Just let me die
    I'm begging you

    that was my favorite part ...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Well written, writing this brings made me feel in a very dark place. A little taste of where you probably were.