Will you...

by Not Enough   Feb 2, 2009


Would you be my hero
Forever at my side
Never let me fall away
Will you always be my guide

Will you be my savior
And wipe away my tears
Chase away my sorrows
Would you destroy my fears

Will you be my lover
And hold me all night long
Kiss me when I start to cry
Would you keep me going on

Will you be the person
That keeps me up at night
So if you ever left me
Things would never be alright

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is beautiful the flow and the rhythm and rhyme conveys a desired love wonderfully

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Which one?

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Huh, this message is a very familiar message that many poets write. Sort of funny how it the message is a little too close to a poem of mine you commented.

    The flow wasn't very choppy, but it mightve been how I read it. I think you could have expressed your vocabulary a bit more, as I've read a few other of your poems.

    4/5

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