Woah girl! This is amazing. This totally kept me reading till the very end. It was written simply, but the meaning was stunning. I honestly really loved it. The simplicity worked in a very good way for this poem. I cant even say how great this was.
Its an amazing feeling when you find your rainbow that comes after the rain. Im glad that you seem to have found your guy.
Really awesome work.
5/5

Your poem is similar to lauras "smile" lol, how odd

Nice! it looks like it's your first try at a love poem by the first stanza, and it turned out very successful, it's a new thing having the dedication as a start to your poem instead of a note at the end.
You used the right words and managed -from what it looks like- to rhyme it although it was hard to.
It all looks perfect to me except I think this stanza :
"My last thought is always of you,
When i close my eyes at night,
I go to sleep with a smile on my face,
Because I know this feels so right."
should come at the end before this one:
"I want to say thankyou,
For turning my life around,
Youve given me something to live for,
You got me up off the ground."
.... at the end they're your feelings and your words and it's your choice to do whatever you want with it and that's the thing that keeps your poem ORIGINAL.... great job.

Loved this poem very much!
so much love emotion put into it!
i can't believe that chick stole it off you!
amazing job!
5/5
xo

This is a beautiful poem The flow is outstanding with the rhyme scheme! I'm glad you have someone to make you happy :)

This is awesome, it's a lovely love poem, it really does show how much he means to you, oh how i wish i had someone like that. :)
thanks for my comment, i thought i'd return the favour and check out your stuff.

Keep it up. :)

This is a sweet and honest poem, well done :]

This is really sweet-i like how it's so casually written-adds sentimentality.
sounds like a great guy!
Very nice opening stanza and closing line-well done!
5/5
xx

Omg this is so sweet:)
i love how it flowed,,
&& that guy sounds greatt :)

5/5

I dont usually write love poems,
But im going to try today.This poem goes out to a special guy,
Who has taken my breath away.

"The first stanza was good. The emotion and the flow but you made a few errors. The first line you need a apostrophe in "Don't" and in the second line you need one with "I'm"."

The smile i wear upon my face,
Is always because of you,
You seem to be the only one,
Who can pick me up when im feeling blue.

"Again another good stanza and the flow was good and the emotion. The only mistake is in the fourth line you need an apostrophe in "I'm"."

My last thought is always of you,
When i close my eyes at night,
I go to sleep with a smile on my face,
Because I know this feels so right.

"This stanza was perfect. The rhyme and the flow and everything else went right into place."

Your loyalty towards me,
Astounds me every time,
Im so lucky to know you,
Even luckier to call you mine.

"This stanza was good as well. The only mistake is you need a apostrophe in the third line with "I'm"."

I know we have something special,
Cause i can trust you with all my heart,
Your such an amazing person,
And im in agony whenever we're apart.

"This was another great stanza. The only mistake is in the fourth line you need an apostrophe in I'm"."

You remind me of a beautiful rainbow,
After hours of pouring rain.
Youre so very special to me,
Youre the one who keeps me sane.

"Another great stanza and the only mistake is in line three and four. you need an apostrophe in "You're"."

The way you always treat me,
Gives me a feeling i never understood,
A feeling that ive never felt,
You make me feel so good.

"Good stanza but in the third line you need and apostrophe with "I've"."

I want to say thankyou,
For turning my life around,
Youve given me something to live for,
You got me up off the ground.

"Good stanza the emotion can be felt through every stanza. The first line ther should be a space between "thank and you". And in line three there should be an apostrophe in "you've"."

You are like an angel, sent from heaven above.
I should thank God for you, cause baby this is love.

Good last stanza and overall this was really a great poem. The only problems were a few punctuation errors. This poem had a good consistent flow and a good rhyme. Good job.

I thought this was great, very well done :] its simple and cute, those are usually the best love poems good job

This was so sweet. i'm sure he loved it!! keep it up, you're doing a great job with writing!! please read and comment on "lasting" i would like to see wgat you think of it.

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! 5/5, nuthing left to say :)

This was a cute one too (=