"The pain has taken over
As I try to take in a breath
The only breath I'm taking in
Is one more closer to death."
- My favourite stanza
Every second we get older, every moment we get closer to death, every breath we breath in is just one more instance where we are lying to ourselves and pretending to be something were not. A wonderful write.
Keep it up xx

Wow. This was so much more then amazing.

"The pain has taken over
As I try to take in a breath
The only breath I'm taking in
Is one more closer to death."

^^ That was also my fav stanza. This poem really hits home for me, and im sure, so many others. It flows through so well and the emotions you poured into this have so much depth, theyre so powerful. Well done. 5/5 and added to my favs.

Good Job!
Sometimes I just feel like that too
I feel like i've been broken a thousand times and I'm the only one who can see and feel it!

My poor lil child ..
Yu dnt need that shit.

Wow, this is really sad but very true in some peoples lifes. Well done, 5/5. Em