Sunsets

by Sarah   Feb 14, 2009


Lustrous colors surrounded by a darkened skylight,
Reflect once again the day's end,
Intertwined luminously within one another,
Passionately await the night that falls ahead.

Specks of gold sparkle like hidden treasure,
Beneath the darkness and exquisite colors,
Reddish-Orange colors scintillate as autumn leaves fall,
Plum-pink rainfall gleams within,
Like a desire to make passionate love,
Gracefully interlaced as betwixt as a bonded army of menage.

Looking at you in wonder,
Thinking about your beauty embraces the heart within,
I eagerly await the next time you beauty whispers to my heart.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Thank you very much... wish u a Happy Valentine's Day too =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Excellent nature piece, I loved all the similes and words you used, it set the scene perfectly and created clear, breathtaking images for the reader to come across.

    "Specks of gold sparkle like hidden treasure,
    Beneath the darkness and exquisite colors,"

    Great descriptions, you are so in-deepth it just wows me!

    "Reddish-Orange colors scintillate as autumn leaves fall,
    Plum-pink rainfall gleams within,"

    How colorful, you really made this poem come alive.

    "Like a desire to make passionate love,
    Gracefully interlaced as betwixt as a bonded army of menage."

    Another good simile, and your wording is so meaningful and wonderful!

    5/5 from me, I heartily enjoyed this nature piece, keep up the amazing work! Take care and Happy Valentine's Day!

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