Just To Be With You

To Be With You,
Just to be with you.
I'd walk miles upon miles,
Swim the everlasting Nile.
Loving you all the while,
It would be well worthwhile.
I'd do anything, I'm versatile
I'd walk the aisle, run all the miles
To be with you,
Just to be with you.

Short, yet so flowing and well worded. I felt the raw emotion behind this poem. I know how you feel when you wrote this and I love seeing someone else as committed. This was a 5/5 for me.

Not my favorite of your poems. It conveys a strong emotion and has a good rhyme scheme. What makes it endearing is the thought one might remake the stars themselves to be with the one they love. ^^

Just came to send a message, and what do I see? A poem that I'd heard of before. I then twigged that it was my name (I can be a bit slow sometimes!) So I thought I might as well take a peek at it anyways :D

To Be With You,
Just to be with you.

^^ Love it. It catches the reader's attention, and not only that, it sums up the longing all in the second line. After this, I could easily imagine the happiness the thought alone could be, all because of that clever little 'just'. Well done :)

I'd walk miles upon miles,
Swim the everlasting Nile.

^^ Just... Perfect. Nothing to comment on here, apart from swimming would be very tiring, commitment there haha. Lovely.

Loving you all the while,
It would be well worthwhile.

^^ The love still exists even when they're trying to get there. And very poetic, which is good :)

I'd do anything, I'm versatile
I'd walk the aisle, run all the miles

^^ Versatile, I like the use of that in poems. The subtle mention of marriage adds another level to this poem, brilliant.

To be with you,
Just to be with you.

^^ A strong ending, the repitition wrapping it all up nicely.

This is a excellent poem Joe, so full of meaning and love, yet not deviating or going off track. Short and sweet is often the best when it comes to poems. This reminds me of, funnily enough, the song To Be With You by Mr Big, which is why I chose my name in the first place.

This gets a 5/5 from me, and my weekly vote because it's the sweetest poem I've read in a while :)

Keep writing,
Emily :)

A declaration of undying love for someone and they would indeed by a very fortunate person to have a love that true. Good job. 5/5

Your poem certainly put a smile on my face. I felt the love. <3