It hurts when the one person you trust most turns away from you. i believe that a lot of us think the world is aginst us, and maybe someday we'll learn that it's not true. i hope so. having said that, everyone can relate to this poem.

This is the best one i think that i have read by youu =]

Your an amaaaazing writer<333
keep it up babe
id love to read more<3

Excellent write 5/5

Amazing. great job. could deff feel the emotion in it. keep up the good work.

victoria

My heart was beating really fast like all the way through it :] this was intense. i love it.

Just fake words to penetrate through ties
My defenses were weak so you sunk right through
All I have left are these reminders of you
Scars on my wrists and bruises too

man i bet so many people can relate to this i know i can this poem was awesome,,,flow was pretty good 5/5
~Courtney

Wow. This was so good!

Kisses!
-Hannah

Wow. This is amazing. Devistating, but amazing none the less. Fantastic job

This is mazing...wow.... this pretty much sums me up at times in my life, when im going through hell...

this is a good poem!! ^_^ Keep it up!!!

Always,
~Brittany~

He who brings you pain, helps you learn. The end of pain, awakens strength.

I felt the poem
i really can relate to it :(

this poem is amazing

Very good poem :)