Alone In My Room

by ChallengexEverything   Feb 24, 2009


Alone in my room,
So quiet, the drop of a pin could be heard.
I cannot breathe, cannot speak at all,
Not a single word.

Alone in my room,
Thoughts race through my head.
So many things,
Better left unsaid.

I'm all alone in my room,
Nothing but these four walls.
Just waiting patiently,
Until my name He calls.

*Again, not the best. but comments are appreciated and criticism is welcomed with open arms:] I'm always open to suggestions for making my writing better.

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  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    It speaks to me loud.
    It shows many things, or at least that's what I think.
    It shows sadness, depression, anticipation for someone, but still calmness, comfort in being alone.
    I like it. It's short, but still very good.
    I can't give you critics, I am not that type, but even I were I wouldn't. This poem is great.
    5/5