Thing Called Love

by Lilly Tagloff   Mar 1, 2009


Verse 1
This thing called love,
It has to prove itself to the world
These high expectations, it just can't seem to hold
Can't we see, it just can't make us fly?

Chorus
It can't overcome your fears,
And it won't kiss the pain
It can't make the rain go away,
And it won't wipe away your tears

Verse 2
We want it from each other,
And we want it from the world
And we want it from the friends and strangers
And we want it from the lord

Chorus

Verse 3
We hate how we life,
But we get what we give
And we forget how to show each other
How to love and forgive

Bridge
[non-existent for now]

KAwiszio©2009

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i'm not good at writing songs. i mainly write poems, which is why the stanzas/verses/chorus are so short! sorry! i'm working on this though.

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  • 15 years ago

    by JusTxXxLiezZz

    Great poem. The words flow smoothly but verses are too short you should make verse one and the chorus just the chorus. 5/5