This piece was just as amazing as the last, maybee better. I like how the poem reminisces and the changes at the end. The beginning was beautiful and the memories were so profound. I caught myself smiling as I read the piece.
Memories are beautiful, they let you relive the past. But they also help you grow. No matter how hurt, things will always fall back into place :]
Great piece. 5/5

I loved the flow of the peice
how you started off reminising about all the good things and then you show the turn.. the down fall on the relationship.

great work
5/5

Hmm, good poem. Just pay attention to grammar and don't forget your punctuation at the end of lines (this is a common error among flourishing poets; I have the same problem). On general content, it was very sweet until, of course, the last stanza. A little misleading that could be good just as it could be bad, depending on how you view it. My favorite stanza is denifitely the second one, I wouldn't change a single thing. Everything was so vividly and sweetly described. Nice work!

“Remember how you would call me on the phone
I'd answer and you would say
"Hello, Is Mrs. Granado here today?"
I'd say "Yes, your talking to her" “

- I like how this is story like, especially with the dialogue. Great idea! Your should be you’re

"Remember the walks through the park
We would spend all day there
Sitting in the grass until nightfall
Kissing each other in the light rain"

- light rain was an amazing addition to this part, I can really picture two people sitting in the park, and kissing in the rain.

"Remember the first time you said "I love you"
How it was the night of my birthday
We had been on the phone for hours
Talking until we fell asleep"

- this stanza doesn’t seem as strong to me as the rest; the slow seems to be off a bit. Maybe extend the last line: talking until we were soundly asleep?
Just a suggestion, be creative =]

"Remember the nights when we would go out
How you would hug me and never let go
We'd cuddle and kiss
How I would tell you "Baby don't ever go""

- im not a big fan of how you repeated “how” at the beginning of lines two and four, also, a little more detail to the cuddling and kissing would be cute =] and go was also repeated and the end of both of those lines and I think that was the cause of the slow being off a bit

"Remember the day you broke my heart
The way you told me you never loved me
How badly you hurt me that day
How now I'm a broken mess
that can never be fixed ever again"

- I actually like the repeated how here, it helps the flow because it is obviously more intentional. It was a great ending and over all a fantastic write. Please don’t take my suggestions to seriously, they’re just suggestions =] also, i know what it is like, how one day somethings can seem so perfect, and then next day the one thing that mattered most is gone... it will get better, keep your head up =]

Greeat write! Keep up the good work

Awwh... This is such a sweet poem and as wll as sad. But written very good. I can so relate to it! and i know how it feels! But hang in there! =]
A awesome job that deserves a 5/5 =]
Keep up the good work

Hmmm I could tell this poem came straight from your heart because it was packed with emotion. I liked how you kept repeating "remember" because the point it got across was quite effective. I think the transition from all the happy memories to how he broke your heart was a little too fast and I wasnt expecting it but maybe its what you intended. Its like you werent expecting him to hurt you and most of the time that is how a heart breaks. There is a lot of potential to make this a perfect poem. It was a good vent poem and I'm sure you felt a little better after writing it.

Wow. this is amazing
its almost like a perfect story book love at the start of it but then at the end its just like love. always ends and leaves you horrible and broken. great great great work. i can feel so much emotion in this.

This was a great poem. I really like it. You have great writting skills. & if this really happened to you...I hope you are able to move on so you can find someone better who wont hurt you

Good work..amazingly done..........i still remember...nice