Lurking in the shadows 2

by Jenna   Mar 16, 2009


Like a whisper in the wind

I lurk in the the shadows

Not invisable, but I am unseen

The sun shines but not on me

In a room full of people

Surrounded by laughter

But I am completely alone.....

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  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    I'm sure many can relate with that emotion. Being surrounded by so many people yet feeling completely alone. Happiness is found within and not in people which is why you need to look for it in yourself before you can look for it in others. I liked how this was short and to the point because you said so much in not so many words which made it a joy to read. I liked what you did with the title. It was a more literal perspective which was interesting to see.

    Well done!
    *5/5*

    Bliss. [Beyond a Poet's Mind.]